Does Steven Moffat have a problem with women?
A debate over the Doctor Who and Sherlock writer's attitude to female characters.
By Helen Lewis Published 09 January 2012 14:13
A debate over the Doctor Who and Sherlock writer's attitude to female characters.{C}
On 1 January, the first episode of the new series of Sherlock aired -- a retelling of the Arthur Conan Doyle story A Scandal in Bohemia called A Scandal in Belgravia. Among several changes from the source material were a few which provoked comment; particularly the decision to adapt the character of Irene Adler ("the woman", as Holmes calls her).
Instead of an opera singer, she was now a dominatrix. And -- spoiler alert -- instead of outwitting Sherlock, she was undone by her decision to make a crucial password dependent on her fearsome crush on the great-coated detective.
That night, Zoe Stavri wrote a blog post called "Irene Adler: how to butcher a brilliant woman character", which argued that "it's pretty when a story written over 120 years ago has better gender politics than its modern reimagining". Jane Clare Jones, writing for Comment is Free, concurred. I, however, disagreed, arguing that there were sound dramatic reasons for the changes.
So I invited Zoe to debate the issue on this blog. Here is our email exchange --
Helen Lewis: First up, cards on the table. I really like Steven Moffat's work; he'd be near the top of any list of British screenwriters working today, and if it were possible to have him cloned, I would find it sorely tempting. Coupling? Hilarious. Jekyll? Creepy. Blink? One of the best pieces of television I've ever seen. Sherlock? So good I watched the first episode again the instant iPlayer would let me.
Maybe my love has blinded me to the fact that he's supposedly a sexist, but I find it hard to believe. The character of Irene Adler in the new series of Sherlock is undoubtedly less strong than her forebear in the books - she doesn't outwit the detective - but there are any number of sound, practical non-sexist reasons why you would make this change. Building a series arc about Moriaty, for one. Not demolishing the key allure of Sherlock the invincible so soon, for another.
Not making every woman in your drama a strong, confident person isn't the same as being systemically sexist. I always remember what The IT Crowd writer Graham Linehan told me: "One thing I have always tried to do is make the female characters as venal, corrupt and silly as the men. Being equally hard on my characters, male or female, is my pathetic little contribution to feminism."
Zoe Stavri: Cards on the table: I, too, adore the work of Steven Moffat. I found myself turning joyful metaphorical cartwheels when it was announced that the man who wrote some of my favourite Doctor Who episodes would be running the whole show. Moffat's writing sizzles and his plots twist with intricacy and never fail to surprise and delight.
I find it difficult, then, to reconcile my love for Moffat's shows with a stripe of sexism I feel runs through it all. Particularly egregious was the first episode in the new series of Sherlock, which is based on an Arthur Conan Doyle story in which Holmes finds himself completely and utterly outsmarted by a woman.
In Moffat's take, not only are Irene Adler's smarts demoted to being due to advice from Holmes's male nemesis Moriarty, but Adler ends up as a damsel in need of rescue.
I would be more willing to excuse this as serving a gender-blind narrative function were it not for the rest of Moffat's body of work I have watched. Let's start with Coupling, which was was funny enough to make even this sour-faced feminist crack a smile, despite much of the humour revolving around the notion that men and women are different species with men wanting sex and women wanting a relationship.
Compared to the men in the show, the women characters are somewhat flat and one-dimensional, desperately scrapping over getting men into their tightly-woven female webs.
Then there's Moffat's run on Doctor Who, which has featured some downright problematic content. Take, for example, the two Moffat Christmas specials. In the more recent one, the plot was resolved by motherhood being the source of women's strength and womb-magic saving everybody. The Christmas before was about a woman in a box who was occasionally taken out for men's amusement.
Put together, a worrying picture emerges. I'd hoped to see Irene Adler done justice on the screen, but she received a similar treatment to the rest of Moffat's women.
HL: OK, I will give you that Moffat's Doctor Who episodes are not as bristlingly right-on as those of his predecessor, Russell T Davies. But still, this is the man behind River Song and Amy Pond and Madame de Pompadour and Sally Sparrow. You could make the argument that these characters are primarily explored in relation to a man, but isn't that the nature of long-running drama?
The Doctor will always be the most interesting character in Doctor Who, in the same way that Sherlock is the lynchpin of Sherlock Holmes. Moffat simply has the "bad fortune" to inherit two series with well-loved leading men. The answer is a few more Buffy the Vampire Slayers (that is also the answer to a number of other problems with TV today, incidentally).
It's interesting that you raise Coupling, because for me that's the hardest to defend. The characters - both male and female - are fairly broad brush, but I'd excuse that as the nature of the sitcom. Does it pass the Bechdel test, though? Possibly it's rare that the female characters discuss anything other than men, but again - the clue is in the title. It's a comedy about relationships. And I don't agree the women are more one-dimensional: of all the character, Jeff is the subject of the most mockery, and is the least "realistic". Is that misandry?
One last thing: Steven Moffat's time in charge of the Tardis has meant there has been a female companion who is - shock horror! - married. I love that. I love that in Moffat's world, you still get to have adventures once you're married, and even when you've had a baby. And yes, I found the "this one is strong" Mummy-knows-bestery of the Christmas episode a bit yukky, but it really was refreshing to see a mother getting to be part of a TV drama doing something other than washing up or nagging.
ZS: You raise a very good point about the nature of long-running dramas and how Moffat's current two shows happen to be centred around men. This is certainly relevant to the issue, and represents the broader problem of sexism in the media: there are far fewer shows, films and books with women in the leading role. I definitely don't expect Moffat to single-handedly solve this entrenched problem, yet there are ways to create a strong woman character in a male-centred show which Moffat has missed entirely.
Returning to Sherlock, there were unfortunate implications to Adler being "beaten" by Sherlock, recasting an independent woman character as one who is ultimately less good than a man and needs to be rescued. This does not exist in a vacuum: it exists in a broader context wherein female characters are largely inferior to men anyway, and in the minds of many, women are still the weaker sex. To take a source material which subverted the Victorian expectation of a weak, emotional woman and return it into something which exemplifies this archaic archetype is inherently problematic.
Moffat has also expressed concerning opinions about women, describing his viewing of Karen Gillan's audition tape as "a shame she's so wee and dumpy" in an episode of Doctor Who Confidential. Ultimately, she ended up in the role as Amy Pond because on meeting he realised she was tall and slim.
To me, a better measure of sexism in the media is not the subversions along the way, nor the Bechdel test, but where the woman characters ultimately end up. In Moffat's work, this is almost universally "in the arms of a man". Whether as a contrite tamed shrew like Adler or having fought their way there through improbable science, they all end up in the same place.
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55 comments
One of the comments in the piece really hit the nail on the head -- that Moffat has written some amazing, vibrant and strong women, too. So to concentrate on the negative, without delving into all the good roles he's written is, I think, trying to beat this up into something it's not.
But surely the Adler thing is more complex - Holmes only won through because of his central flas, his inability to admit emotion. He even asks Mycroft, during the episode, whether there's something wrong with them. This is part of setting Holmes up as deeply unconnected with his emotions, which is what made him lose it so badly in episode 2 - he feels fear, can't trust his own eyes and he absolutely can't cope. That's not big, tough Holmes - that's Sherlock being a much lesser person than Adler was, even if her giving in to emotion did lead to her (short-lived) incarceration. It's a load more complicated than "she falls in love with him, it's her undoing and he wins".
Hello, sweetie.
Guy - you need to take what you've just said and put it in context of gender stereotyping. Yes, Holmes wins because he's emotionally backwards - but 'being less emotional' is a quality that often gets applied to men in a very positive light.
This obviously does damage to men culturally, helping to convince them that it's not done for them to feel or express emotion - but that doesn't stop it from being one of the common traps that make it harder for 'more emotional' women to, for example, be respected in a business environment.
As Zoe says - you can't analyse these issues in a void.
I think, to an extent, it depends on one's definition of sexism.
I certainly don't think Moffat hates women (quite the reverse, in fact). I don't there's any evidence he sees them as inferior, either: he created Press Gang's Lynda Day, for a start.
But he clearly does find them perplexing: at least twice in the last season of Who, the Doctor says something that translates, roughly, as "Tch. Women, eh?" Also, he writes them in broad strokes and defines them largely by their relationship to the male leads: most of his female characters are either lonely and desperate; sassy and wisecracking; entirely asexual mother figures; or vamps. He's basically defining all his women in relation to his own sexuality.
I'm not sure that's sexism in the old-fashioned sense, since he clearly has a lot of time for strong women (look who he's married to). But it's not exactly a vision of feminist equality, either.
Looking up from his copy of the New Statesman, Holmes looked at Watson and murmured that the middle classes must have too much time on their hands to be so bothered about such unimportant matters.
"No shit Sherlock" thought Watson.
After Davies, a lot of Moffat's character work seems sort of lazy and heteronormative - it's also much less political or concerned with freedom of thought - but Davies also got a lot of stick for using nagging/tacky Mum figures as characters. Lazy heteronormativity is the shallow end of the sexism pool and Moffat should probably take a look or try venturing beyond the superficially appealing but clichéd 'battle of the sexes'-type dialogue he sometimes writes. Women aren't commissioned to write for Who generally and that needs to change; Sherlock is perhaps a different kettle of fish.
However, in all the to/fro I've seen on Moffat, nobody's managed to point out that the WOMB POWER aspect of Christmas Doctor Who was a Narnia inversion, so I will: CS Lewis' female characters were banned from Narnia after puberty and derided for being grown women, whereas Moffat's pseudo-Narnia was a place where a woman's presence was key. So perhaps in this case, we have a trees/forest problem...
Get a life, you pair of saddoes.
They're not missing it. Zoe Stavri above said the first 80 minutes of the story was brilliant.
The problem people are finding is with how the story ENDS, not the various twists and turns it takes to get there. The original version ends with Irene very much on top and Watson summing up the situation as 'the best plans of Mr Sherlock Holmes beaten by a woman's wit'; this one doesn't.
Another way of putting it is that the modern version adds on an extra ending. Original: she outsmarted him. New version: she outsmarted him, and then she did it again, but then HE outsmarted HER and saved her from terrorists.
It's a bit disingenuous to talk about what happens in a story without looking at WHEN it happens. It doesn't matter if A outsmarts B a dozen times in the course of a narrative if B still comes up trumps in the end.
Also, isn't the clue in the titles. Dr Who and Sherlock. Its kind of a giveaway who the main character is, who you should be rooting for etc, every other caharacter is secondary and shoukld be inferior.
I'm a big fan of Moffat overall, but I also find his writing of women grates after Davies. Do we have to use the phrase "right-on" to describe any writing of a woman as a character in her own right rather than in terms of how attractive she is? (River Song is a strong character, yes, but the fact that one of the first things she did after regenerating was check how big her boobs were - I mean, please!)
I can't belive I read this article and the comments. Slow day at work.
Does Steven Moffat write strong female characters? Yes!
Does Steven Moffat write weakfemale characters? Yes!
Does Steven Moffat have a problem with women? No.
Do some people have way too much time to over analyse light entertainment TV and cherry pick atttributes from certain characters to make a generalisation about a mans personality and accuse him of sexism. Certainly.
Dr Who, Sherlock, do you people really watch this crap? It's for kids FFS.
Why do people think River Song is a 'strong' character? Giving a character spectacular ability in a range of fields - guns, archaeology, TARDIS piloting - doesn't make a character strong. Giving someone the magic power to fly a spaceship just because they're female doesn't make them strong either. Nor does making them brilliantly intelligent.
'It is our choices, Harry, that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities.'
'Does Steven Moffat have a problem with women?'
If he didn't before, he may have now. Except I doubt if he had or will. This is all MPB - meeja parasitic bandwaggoning.
Am I the only person who finds Steven Moffat's writing a bit self-indulgent?
Chris is bob on.
While I agree that Moffat's sexual politics are questionable, I find the lauding of Russell T. Davies as some kind of PC exemplar to be utterly risible. Whatever his public persona may be, his Doctor Who writing was consistently reactionary and xenophobic - and hateful of women, beginning with the portrayal of Rose's middle-aged mum as a hilarious sexual freak.
'... the best plans of Mr. Sherlock Holmes were beaten by a woman's wit.' - Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, A Scandal In Bohemia
His charcters in Chalk and Press gagn were ground breaking ,his stories beofre becoming script editor of who, Like River song in Silence in the library or Sally sparrow in Blink Madame Pompadom in Girl oin the fire place were very interesting, Just cos Adler got her kit off in Sherlock last week,what's the problem
Zoe Stavri is on the money.
Another way of saying the same thing:
http://edwhitfield.wordpress.com/2012/01/04/dear-steven-moffat-sherlock-...
Am I the only person who finds Moffat's work as dull, pedestrian and predictable as this discussion.